Sunday, August 26, 2012

The Sentimentalist


Sixty years later the young woman in the faded blue jeans and the tan leather jacket returned to Cherryville. She’d stopped to shed her last vengeful tears while still out of sight of the town and now, cheeks dried and eyes clear and hard, she was ready.

She rolled into town on a weathered black sociable, its left seat long ago removed and replaced by a battered old rivercane basket, currently filled with an assortment of dried fruits, nuts, jerky and a faintly glowing data tablet, resting languidly atop this humble bounty. 

Her tires kicked up dust and small stones as she braked to a halt in front of the first of three skyscrapers that constituted Cherryville's main street - its only street. In thirty seconds' ride she could put tiny Cherryville over the horizon behind her, but duty and destiny demanded their due.

She leaned her sociable against a hitching post and stepped onto the boardwalk, pausing a moment to stamp the dust from her boots, remove her wide-brimmed hat and gaze up at the towers of glass and steel before her. GENERAL STORE, pronounced the easternmost tower in bold block letters of carved and cracking obsidian. SALOON, read the middle tower. And POST OFFICE, read the last.

She hesitated before the revolving glass and steel door that led to the saloon, and one slightly callused but meticulously manicured hand brushed against the pistol holstered at her hip. Others might have been comforted by its deadly weight, but the young woman felt the gun as a cold, lethal lump leeching the heat from her body, a malevolent force pregnant with ugly potential. It had been her partner for half a century, and there was no ending their dark contract now. She took an uneasy breath and entered the saloon.

The skyscraper was mostly empty space, its one hundred fifty floors merely ringing the inner walls, balconies open to the interior. On the ground floor hundreds of townspeople lined the bar or lounged at round oak tables as they dined, played cards or, more commonly, ignored each other in favour of consulting their smart phones. There was no music, only the low murmur of conversation.

She stood at the saloon entrance for long enough to attract some attention and then pulled her jacket open to reveal the large, polished black opal pinned to her blouse. The crowd fell silent.

“You know why I’m here,” she said. “At precisely noon today the extension granted you by the Confederation of the Living expires. Per the agreement, you will now surrender yourselves for conversion in an orderly fashion –”

But as usual, the crowd wouldn’t allow her to finish. Time seemed to slow to a crawl as the first terrified citizen drew his primitive sidearm, his blue eyes bloodshot and bulging with panic, beads of sweat glistening on his pale skin.

He was only halfway out of his chair before the young woman and her gun were one being once more, her arm extended, eyes half-open, her expression serene but sad. The first conversion slug burped from the barrel of her pistol and sailed across the room and through the citizen’s heart, its recording devices transmitting the sounds and sights of the man’s death to the young woman’s tablet on the street outside.

She would have preferred if the first violent conversion could have persuaded the others to surrender, but this crowd was too attached to their corporeal home. Bullets, flechettes, darts and bolts crisscrossed the room in search of her flesh; she felt something bite into her left side, and another missile grazed her cheekbone, leaving a shallow gash that oozed a slow trickle of blood.

It wasn’t enough to distract the partnership. Her body moved with the grace of a dancer, long hair whipping in an arc as she pirouetted through the saloon, conversion slugs ripping through guts and brains and faces and lungs, every atrocity duly recorded. Once or twice an especially gifted citizen nearly managed to kill her, but her reflexes and the gun’s silent psychic warnings kept her injuries to a shameful minimum.

It was over in minutes. The carpet was soaked with blood; her boots squelched as she left the saloon.

The Cherryville postman was standing beside her sociable, holding her data tablet, eyes agog. He looked up at her as she stepped down from the boardwalk, taking the tablet back.

“Anyone else in town?” she asked, gesturing with her chin at the post office and the general store. Her eyes were wet again, and tiny rivers of blood dripped from cheekbone to jawline. 

“Just me,” he said. “Everyone else was waiting for you in there. They thought maybe they’d have a chance if everyone...well. I thought I’d go with a little dignity.”

She nodded, wearing her mask of indifference. She reached out with her left hand, the polished black surface of her pointed nails shifting and whirling to reveal vast star fields, a universe on every fingertip. But before she could touch his grizzled cheek, he raised a hand to ask a question. She waited.

“Why do you take those awful videos?” he asked. “Surely it’s not necessary, and who’s going to watch them...you?”

Her thin lips twisted in a sad smile.

“I’m not so different than you,” she answered. “I’m a sentimentalist.”

He frowned, on the cusp of understanding. But then her starry fingertips graced his cheek, and the postman burst into wisps of silver smoke, lost on the wind.




2 comments:

BLaZe said...

I liked it. But its not done.

Earl J. Woods said...

It's not done? Unfortunately I have no idea what happens next...